TN1 [3 Under 3] [3 rather A>Therewith there was released<A 3] 48.05 a [3 A>poisoning<A 3] TN2 cloud indeed ! Yet all they who heard or redelivered are now as much no more as were they not yet now or had they then not ever been. [3 A>Perhaps in some future we shall presently hear 48.1048.15 the zitherer of the past and his merrymen .<A 3] Of [3 Hosty A>B>the persons in the story C>(which is completely D>from tub to bottom<D falsetissues and antilibellous and nonactionable D>& this applies to the in whole of the volume<D )<C<B Osti<A 3] , 48.20quite a musical genius in a small way and the owner of an exceedingly [3 nice A>niced<A 3] ear , no [3 A>one<A 3] end is known .
Textual Notes
1 Though the “The data” passage (FW: 57.16-61.28 [JJA: 45.138]) is first-drafted first, Joyce must have decided almost at once to precede it with the “cloud of witnesses” passage (FW: 48-50.32 [JJA 45: 137]), to which he then adds the “well-authenticated fact” passage (FW: 50.35-56.19 [JJA 45: 140, 142-3]) as a long overlay addition to level 1. At level 2 Joyce brings “Under rather a cloud . . .” to the margin, as he usually did when copying (or having typed) a new unit of the book (as do also the typescript at levels 3 and 5 and the fair copy at level 4). At this point, then, I think he intended chapter 3 to begin where in fact it does.
2 In level 3 overlay, “volume” is the last word of overlay “(which is . . . volume” (FW: 48.17-19), but that word “volume” immediately follows and is alone on a line with the overlay “poisoning”" which is inserted within “a cloud” (FW: 48.05). Clearly, “a poisoning cloud” is what Joyce had in mind, and “volume” had nothing to do with it. On level 4, however, Joyce is misled by the contiguity of those two actually separate overlays into copying both words (and adding “of” for the grammar) at FW: 48.05, but he copies “volume” again in its proper place as well.