TN1 Chest Cee! 'Sdense ! Corpo di barragio ! you spoof of visibility in a freakfog , of mixed sex cases among goats, hill cat and plain mousey, Bigamy Bob and his old Shanvocht ! The Blackfriars treacle plaster outrage be liddled! Therewith was released in that 48.05kingsrick of Humidia a poisoning volume of cloud barrage indeed . Yet all they who heard or redelivered are now with that family of bards and Vergobretas himself and the crowd of Caraculacticors as much no more as be they not yet now or had they then notever been. Canbe in some future we shall presently here amid 48.10those zouave players of Inkermann the mime mumming the mick and his nick miming their maggies , Hilton St Just ( [9T TD <Mr> Mr. 9T] Frank Smith), Ivanne Ste Austelle ( [9T TD <Mr> A>Mr.<A 9T] J. F. Jones) , Coleman of Lucan taking four parts, a choir of the O'Daley [9T TD <O'Doyles> O' Doyles 9T] doublesixing the chorus in Fenn Mac Call and the Serven Feeries of Loch Neach, 48.15Galloper [9T TD <Tropples and> Troppler andTN2 9T] Hurleyquinn [9T TD <and>TN3 9T] the zitherer of the past with his merrymen all, zimzim , zimzim . Of the persins sin this Eyrawyggla saga (which , thorough readable to int from and, is from tubb to buttom all falsetissues , antilibellous and nonactionable and this applies to its whole wholume ) of poor Osti-Fosti , described as 48.20quite a musical genius in a small way and the owner of an exceedingly niced ear , with tenorist voice to match, not alone, but a very major poet of the poorly meritary order (he began Tuonisonian but worked his passage up as far as the we-all-hang-together Animandovites ;TN4 no one end is known . If they
Textual Notes
1 Though the “The data” passage (FW: 57.16-61.28 [JJA: 45.138]) is first-drafted first, Joyce must have decided almost at once to precede it with the “cloud of witnesses” passage (FW: 48-50.32 [JJA 45: 137]), to which he then adds the “well-authenticated fact” passage (FW: 50.35-56.19 [JJA 45: 140, 142-3]) as a long overlay addition to level 1. At level 2 Joyce brings “Under rather a cloud . . .” to the margin, as he usually did when copying (or having typed) a new unit of the book (as do also the typescript at levels 3 and 5 and the fair copy at level 4). At this point, then, I think he intended chapter 3 to begin where in fact it does.
2 I am quite sure that Joyce intended “Tropples” rather than “Troppler” at level 9: see the different slant to the final stroke from that of “Galloper”. And note that the typist at level 9T wrongly underlines “and”, suggesting a single piece combining Gulliver's Travels and the character Harlequin.
3 The “and” which follows the “s” index after “maggies” in the first overlay level is not typed at level 9T after the insertion ending with “Hurleyquinn” as it should have been, although it was typed and then exed out after “maggies” when the typist noticed the insertion which the “s” indexes, which begins “, Hilton . . .”
4 In his overlay draft on level 9, Joyce begins his parenthetical clause, “he began . . . Animandovites”, with an open parenthesis but ends it with a semicolon, a simple inadvertence. The correction, by change of the semicolon to a close parenthesis at the end, is a rare instance of something we can be quite sure was correction on the page proof.