7. Patterned after a cartoon character designed by Walt Disney himself, the University was granted permission to use the Duck as a mascot many years ago.

Is that correct?

Of course not.

The first part of the sentence (Patterned after a cartoon character designed by Walt Disney himself) is a modifier. The first noun that follows is what it's supposed to modify. What this sentence seems to be saying is that the university was patterned after a cartoon character. It's the dreaded dangling modifier.

Am I being too Mickey Mouse about this?

Dangling modifiers are a problem because they are illogical. At best, they make sentences hard to read. At worst, they sound really silly.

To fix a sentence with a dangling modifier, you generally need to rewrite it. For example, the following would get rid of the dangling modifier:

The University was granted permission to use the Duck, which was patterned after a cartoon character designed by Walt Disney, as a mascot many years ago.

But it doesn't read very well. Major surgery often helps:

The University patterned its mascot after a cartoon character designed by Walt Disney himself. The school received permission to use it many years ago.

You were expecting Donald or Daffy?

Or maybe something a little less loony?


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